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2013-02-06 05:52 8006706 Anonymous (Wallpapper.png 745x420 323kB)
Finished it today. Enjoy. >http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BQ_ QGyDzjx8

2 min later 8006736 Anonymous
LE RAPE JOKE XDDDDDDD

5 min later 8006797 Ken D. Blackwell (DarthVaderThumbsUp.jpg 206x244 6kB)
>Wilhelm Scream Sure, it's overused. But damned if it still isn't awesome.

7 min later 8006818 Anonymous
>>8006797 i know, right?!

8 min later 8006833 CapperGeneral (i love this pic.png 460x350 222kB)
>>8006706 not bad anon

16 min later 8006949 Anonymous
>>8006833 thanks

18 min later 8006981 Anonymous
>>8006706 Very nice animation, keep it up!

22 min later 8007037 Anonymous
>>8006797 i have it in my sound folder, i have yet to use it

22 min later 8007039 Anonymous
I liked the concept and the animation, only thing that put me off was the unfortunate Tommy Wiseau voice acting. Make more pls.

23 min later 8007068 Anonymous
Not bat as far as ytpoop goes. Scream was neat. Explain this "we see we judge" faggotry to me please.

24 min later 8007070 Anonymous
>>8007039 I knew it would be my downfall... I suck at VA

25 min later 8007094 Anonymous
>>8007068 I found that picture on google and I actually wanted to edited those words out and just have the face with the pony eyes.. but I forgot...

27 min later 8007131 Anonymous
Good animation, just tone down on the eye crap.

28 min later 8007144 Anonymous
>>8007094 Oh. Good job anyway!

35 min later 8007259 Anonymous (oh you.png 376x376 73kB)
>>8007144

1 hours later 8007703 Anonymous
9/10 It was okay

1 hours later 8007747 Anonymous
>>8007703 IGN, is that you?

1 hours later 8007767 Anonymous
>>8006706 le subscribed faec

1 hours later 8007806 Anonymous
I appreciate the effort that went into this but isn't it a bit late for a bed intruder reference? Like, 2 years late?

1 hours later 8007839 Anonymous
>>8007806 It's a Flutterrape reference and that shit is timeless

1 hours later 8007854 Anonymous
The eyes irritate me, and it wasn't too funny either. Props for Wilhelm scream, and the effort put on the animation. It wasn't all bad.

1 hours later 8007936 Anonymous
>>8007854 >rape is not funny What happened to you /mlp/? You used to be cool

1 hours later 8008017 Anonymous (1359525256920.jpg 2200x1700 286kB)
You sir just got a subscriber, I agree with Vader that the scream is over-used but it's still awesome as hell! Very well animated, better than anything I could do.

1 hours later 8008136 Anonymous
Needs better voice acting! Or more voice actors!

1 hours later 8008171 Anonymous
>guile theme song I missed the days when that was the thing.

1 hours later 8008220 Anonymous (135990395768820.gif 626x542 142kB)
>>8007936 No one cares

1 hours later 8008250 Anonymous
>>8008136 >>8008136 >>8008136 >>8008136

1 hours later 8008254 Anonymous
>>8008136 I actually tried to have 2 people voicing it, but they were even worse than me...

1 hours later 8008263 Anonymous
>>8008220 Edgy

1 hours later 8008296 Anonymous
Inb4 EQDaily.

1 hours later 8008322 Anonymous
>>8008296 There's not way this is gonna get there. It's /mlp/ kinda stuff and they don't like it.

1 hours later 8008351 Anonymous
>>8008296 > Have bad language videos > Have .mov videos >HURP DERP MEME VIDEO IS TOO EDGY FOR THEM! They usually have a red NSFW spoiler

1 hours later 8008379 Anonymous (1359837252008.png 320x289 69kB)
I want to be rape by Fluttershy so... I enjoy this video...

1 hours later 8008399 Anonymous
>>8008351 >Go watch my other animations they told me by e-mail, and I'm paraphrasing: "Not sure we can roll with this. It's more /mlp/ kinda stuff"

1 hours later 8008434 RinblowDish (1358179060104.jpg 500x500 48kB)
>>8000000

1 hours later 8008512 Anonymous (eqdemail.png 894x462 59kB)
>>8008351 Ye, that seems legit.

1 hours later 8008553 Anonymous
6/5 overwhelming taste of salami

2 hours later 8008680 Anonymous (1358886722317.png 250x250 99kB)
I did not find the video funny. I wanted to, because anon clearly put a lot of effort into it, but it just wasn't funny. You can't just take someone else's words and then say them again with less dramatization in a different (and nonsensical) context. The pacing was bad (too long mostly), the guile theme was forced, and Applejack's expression at the very end did not fit at all (she had just been talking about how FS is a menace, and then makes this kind of embarrassed "teehee~ xD that's Fluttershy!" face while FS is assaulting anon). Your animation could use a little work, but you'll figure that out. The voice acting was passable, but should improve if you keep making more. Your main issue is the writing. Spend more time on the planning phase to actually conjure something that will evoke chuckles.

2 hours later 8008820 Anonymous
>>8008680 I hear you. I was trying to make AJ sound apologetic which explains the expression at the end when she seems kinda embarassed for it. Again, I agree that the voice acting is kinda terrible (and I felt it was worthy of mentioning, hence the video description). Sure, the animation is not even that great and I'm even surprised to see people saying it's good, since it's my 4th animation ever and I'm still learning. And you're the first one to actually mention my greatest flaw and I commend you for it. I don't plan animations. I just do them and that's the next step for me.

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