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2012-09-21 01:43 4601604 Dakan PiE: Thread the Third (PIE photo.png 466x700 583kB)
What happens when ponies come to Earth? Lets find out! Welcome to PiE! Old Thread: >>4316204 Ponyville Apartements http://pastebin.com/u/ChocolateChipPancake Pillow Case: She likes Cloth http://pastebin.com/HtNbiz2s The Roseluck Chronicles http://pastebin.com/u/Fourdak Motor City http://pastebin.com/u/Mortimer_Mouse First thread: http://pastebin.com/v4JgQzCv

11 min later 4601688 Anonymous
should the other thread be also on a pastebin like the first?

1 hours later 4602084 Dakan The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt6: A New Day
Didn't think I was going to have this till tommorow morning. But, here we are the next part. >You slowly open your eyes the next morning >Weird you should be feeling the effects from last night >That and your bed is empty >Where’s Rose? >You don’t hear any movement in the apartment >You slowly get out of bed >The sheets are clean… >There is no rosy smell on the pillow next to you… >You look in the corner where Rose had discarded her dress >Missing >No, this can’t be… >You frantically get up and start searching the apartment >Not in the kitchen or living room >Not in the bathroom either >Her coat and bag are both gone from the hooks >The date, It should be November >It’s only the second weekend in September >Your mind slowly comes to terms on the truth >A dream… >The last month and a half >All that time with that beautiful pony >Just a dream >You collapse on the sofa and turn on the news >boring human news >No metions of ponies anywhere >Like they never appeared… >It never happened… >It was such a good dream >It was such a great story… >A great story… >Yes, I can write something from this >You rush to the computer and boot it up >Now where to write… >There’s only one place where something like this can go >4chan >/mlp/ >Now where was that thread you saw 2 days ago >PiE, there it is >You click on the thread and type in the comment box the first line of your story >”It had been another long day…”

1 hours later 4602091 Dakan
>>4602084 End of Part 6 End of Chapter 3 The End...

1 hours later 4602110 Anonymous
Your second thread lasted over two weeks Is this really something that wouldn't fit in AiE under any circumstance? They've fudged the rules in the past.

1 hours later 4602172 Dakan
>>4602110 I'm not the orginalcreator in of the threads, I just happen to be the one who started the last 2. If you want answers talk to Mr. Blue

1 hours later 4602213 Anonymous
>>4602084 >inb4 inception

1 hours later 4602214 Anonymous
>>4602110 As far as I know they're pretty picky about anon having to be in Equestria at some point during the story. Which is why this thread was made in the first place, but you can ask them yourself if you want.

1 hours later 4602248 Anonymous
>>4602172 >>4602214 Not saying there's anything wrong with it, but in a sense, you're sort of competing with them for the same audience of fanfic readers on /mlp/. I dunno, it's your thread.

1 hours later 4602411 Anonymous
>>4602091 Fuck, why i knew this would end up all being a dream?

1 hours later 4602561 Anonymous
>>4602091 I will fucking murder you Obligatory death threat aside, seriously dude? The 'It was all a dream" ending? Disappointing

2 hours later 4602623 Anonymous
>>4602411 >>4602561 It's not on his pastebin, so I wouldn't get too worried. I'm thinking this is just a cruel joke.

2 hours later 4602735 Anonymous
>>4602084 .... Seriously? I could write a better ending with my dick tied in a knot.

3 hours later 4603268 Anonymous
>>4602623 i sure hope so, i like that plot

3 hours later 4603359 Anonymous
Oh gosh. I feel a little let down man. I don't think there was any foreshadowing you just threw that at us. Oh well, it was a fun story.

3 hours later 4603396 Anonymous
>What happens when ponies come to Earth? Those poor little fucks. Hopefully they die quickly and without much pain.

5 hours later 4604361 Anonymous
>>4603359 I actually thought this would happen but was like "nah he wont do that and in the begining he proved he was not sleeping"

5 hours later 4604792 Dakan The Roseluck Chronicls Ch3 Pt6: A New Day
>>4602084 Did you actually think I would end it like this...? Yes I know it was a cruel joke... but don't worry. There is a bit more of a brite future for Anon and Rose. The rest of part 6 below >You wake with a start. >You are immediately greeted by a pounding head ache >Oh alcohol why must you be a cruel mistress? >Wait a head ache >That means… >You feel her; she is lying on your chest >You slowly open your eyes and witness rose fast asleep >This is real >Oh thank celestia this is real >You breathe heavily >As you reaffirm yourself, you feel the sleeping pony stir >A stifled moan escapes from her >She must be as hung over as you are >Her green eyes flutter open and she immediately looks to you >A smile crosses her face as she relaxes against your body “Good Morning, stallion.” >Stallion why does that sound so good to you? >You reach up and run you hand through her mane >”Good morning beautiful” >She looks into your eyes again “Last night… it was…” >You recognize the emotion of fear >Why is she scared >Oh, that’s why… >No, you are not going to do that to her again >She is your pony, she is your mare >”Last night was perfect” >You gently give her a kiss on the forehead >Her smile broadens “Last night was perfect.”

5 hours later 4604805 Dakan The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt6: A New Day
>>4604792 >You lie there with her for a good long while >”We really should get cleaned up, and start the day…” “Do we have to; I could try to convince you otherwise…” >This pony is going to be the death of you… >”Yes, we I have some laundry to do and some errands to run.” >Rose slowly lifts off of you and unsteadily gets out of bed >Time to start the day right >A quick shower should do the trick >Although “quick” is always a relative term… >Your bathroom you come to find out has really nice acoustics >Be it Roses singing or otherwise >After a nice friendly shower a big greasy breakfast >Everything just seems to taste better this morning >You wonder why >After breakfast you let rose relax on the couch while you do some of the weekly chores >You gather up the laundry, strip the bed of the now soiled sheets, and head down the laundry room >While downstairs you grab the Sunday edition paper. >Nothing to terribly interesting today >You jog up the stair back to the apartment >Rose still lies on the couch staring at the TV

5 hours later 4604814 Dakan The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt6: A New Day
>>4604805 >”Anything interesting on?” >She shakes her head no and continues to watch >You join her on the couch >as you sit down Rose places her head in your lap >She start up at you with the green eyes you have come to enjoy so much >The smell of roses hangs in the air around her >God how you love that “Anon?” >”hmm?” ”Where do we go from here?” >You take a pause >Where do we go from here… >While it looks like human and pony relationships aren’t rare >They are largely uncommon >There are still people who have a prejudice against the ponies >That prejudice may just grow when they come to find out the truth >Why is it when things get better, they also get more complicated. >This question makes you head pound that much harder… >You slowly pet Rose’s mane >”We’ll just have to take it one day at a time Rose.” >One day at a time…

5 hours later 4604828 HateBit
>>4602214 Relatively new AiE writer here. Some AiE guys will get a bit picky, I guess, but for the most part you would probably be fine. There are a few stories in AiE that already share the premise of Pony going to Humanland, instead of the other way around. One writer was clever enough to make their pony the Anonymous, but he stopped writing that story I believe. >>4602248 I wish this idea would take off, I don't care if we have competition just so long as you guys put out some product. I still haven't gotten a satisfactory answer as to why the Flutterrape threads branched off of the AiE ones.

5 hours later 4604862 Dakan
>>4604814 End of Part 6 End of Chapter 3 I really want to get a good start on Chapter 4 this weekend. So expect some good updates. I again must apologive for the cruel joke. I thought it was an interesting way to follow up that clopfic I wrote. Anyways... Next time on The Roseluck Chronicles The Truth is revealed! H&H! A special proposal! And Flowers! Join us next time. Same poni time! Same poni channel!

6 hours later 4605247 Mortimer Mouse (1345065945601.jpg 500x500 94kB)
I thought we agreed on NOT starting new threads with just the plain old pastebin links and a link to the old thread, but instead with a story?

6 hours later 4605384 Anonymous
>>4604862 Personally I'm amazed so many people fell for it, but I'm looking forward to more. That was a good update and gave me some good feels. Keep up the good work!

6 hours later 4605390 Anonymous
There was this Dovakin guy that wrote a story with this premise. Everyone else ignored him in the AiE thread. If he were still alive...

6 hours later 4605458 Dakan
>>4605247 Yes, but I had zero story read, and the old thread only had a few post left. Unless you wnat me to post the clop here...

7 hours later 4605686 W4rp fuck you...
this is the same depression like when .hack twilight ended :< Talk about a cruel joke... but good that you continue making these. at least 20 chapters okay?

7 hours later 4605754 Anonymous
>>4602091 I almost shed a tear when i originally read this. Excited to read even more.

7 hours later 4605774 Dakan
>>4605686 20 chapters... right...

7 hours later 4605795 Dakan
>>4605458 Why did I have zero story read? I had zero story written, but I had most of them read. I just don't know what went wrong...

10 hours later 4608846 Anonymous
I really need that roseluck right now. Many feels are being felt. Keep up the good work!

13 hours later 4610561 Anonymous
>>4603396 The sad truth of the matter

13 hours later 4610960 Anonymous
>>4602623 I apologize for the knee-jerk reaction, I don't know what came over me.....this story has me in it's clutches

14 hours later 4611622 Pancakes Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed (40.jpg 797x830 73kB)
Previously, on Ponyville Apartments: http://pastebin.com/u/ChocolateChipPancake > Pinkie Pie takes the guitar-shaped controller in her hands. > She swipes the card on the machine, then she turns to me. "Play with me?" she asks. > Again with that bright smile upon her face. > I sigh as I take the other controller and swipe my card. > "Can we start with something easy? My legs are still-" " Ooo! Check it out! This one sounds really fun!" > She points her hoof at the screen. > Looks like the very last song on the list. > Wait. Wasn't this song used for an official world record before? > "Uh, Pinkie Pie!?" "It sounds easy enough. Let's play this on 'Expert'!" > The pony makes the selection before I can stop her. > She turns to me while the screen loads. "Something wrong?" she asks. "You don't look so good." > I don't feel that good. Haven't yet recovered from the last one. > But for some reason, I grit my teeth and force a smile for her. > "I'm just fine. Let's do this!" "Okey dokey lokey!" > The screen fills up with a ridiculous number of notes. > And this is just the intro part. > I keep my attention focused on the screen. > Somehow, we make it to the beginning of the song. "On a cold winter morning, in a time before the light," > Then, I finally realize it. "In flames of death's eternal reign, we ride towards the fight!" > The reason why I keep playing. "When the darkness has fallen down, and the times are tough alright," > No matter how I look at it, this is... "The sound of evil laughter falls, around the world tonight!" > ... really FUN!

14 hours later 4611737 Anonymous (1336028152850.gif 202x237 279kB)
Hey Pancakes! Just raced through your pastebin! Good stuff! :D

14 hours later 4612284 Pancakes Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed
>>4611622 > "Uh, Pinkie? Are you sure Rainbow's around here?" "Yep! I saw her head this way earlier." > This side of the place is filled with racing games. > I don't doubt that the cyan pegasus would enjoy herself here. > But where is she? I just see the usual crowd of players. > It isn't like her to just disappear- > Then, I feel a hoof tap my shoulder. "Looking for me?" whispers a familiar voice. > I sigh in relief. > "Don't worry us like that, Rainbow. Huh?" > The pegasus pony seems to have acquired an over-sized biker helmet. > Complete with burning skull design. "Ooo!" cries Pinkie. "Where'd you get that? Did you win it from one of those games?" "Something like that," says Rainbow. "Check this out." > She holds out her hoof. Several game cards. A big wad of cash. "Isn't it great? I even got this awesome helmet!" > A shiver runs down my spine. I look at her uneasily. > "Uh, Rainbow? How did you get all this?" "Easy! Some tough guy challenged me to a race on those machines, so I cleaned him out!" > "You were gambling!?" "A few bets never hurt nop0ny! Err... something wrong?" > Rainbow gives me a worried look. > "I'll explain later," I manage. "Right now, we should get-" "Wait! Wait! Wait!" cries Pinkie. "Can we go try one of those before we go?" > The pink pony raises her hoof toward a crane game. > She seems to have an eye for the stuffed alligator in the corner. > "...fine."

14 hours later 4612322 Loscil
>>4612284 For some fucking reason, Pastebin can't load. Wat do?

14 hours later 4612401 Anonymous
This thread is just as bad as the AiE fags. Good god just get off 4chan and take your faggotry with you!!

14 hours later 4612477 Pancakes
>>4611737 Thanks! >>4612322 Works fine from my end. Try clearing your browser cache and cookies.

15 hours later 4613045 Pancakes Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed
>>4612284 > Rainbow yawns as she watches the two from afar. > They sure take their time. "What a bother," she mutters. > Someone taps her on the shoulder. > The pegasus quickly turns around. > A large, well-built human stands before her. > He is wearing an expensive looking suit and a pair of shades. "And what do you want?" asks Rainbow. "Woah! Take it easy! I just want to talk!" "Talk?" "A job, to be exact. But just to be sure, you ARE the fastest racer this side of town, right?" > Rainbow puffs out her chest proudly. "That's right! You got a problem with that!?" "Of course not! I just didn't think that you'd be a girl..." "And what is THAT supposed to mean?" "N-nothing! Here." > He pulls out an envelope from his pocket and hands it over. "We would like to employ your skills in transporting some goods. Just think of it as quick and easy money." "Easy money, eh?" > Rainbow takes the envelope cautiously. "And don't forget to wear that helmet so our people can recognize you." > He quickly walks away before she can respond. > Rainbow glances around her before opening the envelope. > Then, she smiles excitedly. "Yep! Easy money!"

15 hours later 4613741 Pancakes Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed (41.jpg 697x443 22kB)
>>4613045 > After dinner, I decide to talk to Rainbow Dash. > Probably just my paranoia, but I feel that I should warn her. > The video arcade is at the border of the east side gangs, after all. > I knock on the door again, but no answer. > "Rainbow? Are you in there?" "Nope. She isn't in here!" > The door opens, revealing the pink pony. > "Huh? Pinkie Pie?" "Yep. I just checked, but it looks like Rainbow isn't here!" > "Uh, right. What were you doing in there, anyway?" > She pulls out the alligator plushie she won earlier. "I wanted to introduce her to Gummy #2, of course!" > "Hmm. I'll see if I can find her, then." "Ooo! Sounds fun! Can I join you?" > "Uh, sure. I guess." "Yay!" > A pink pony carrying a plush toy joins the party! > Not sure if good idea, but whatever. > We check the other rooms, but the other ponies haven't seen her as well. > Then, as we reach the first floor. "Hey! Isn't that-" > Something wearing black just flew over the apartment gate. > It was carrying something round. But more importantly, > It had a rainbow-colored tail. > This cannot be good.

15 hours later 4613828 Pancakes
>>4613741 Ending here for now. Pastebin updated.

16 hours later 4614657 Anonymous (1316909332244.png 267x267 57kB)
>>4613828 Do you have anything else online besides on pastebin??

17 hours later 4615381 Parasite Steve
Can I get in on this?

18 hours later 4616135 Dakan
>>4615381 Sure can, all new writers are welcome!

21 hours later 4618705 Dakan The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4:Hearts and Hooves Pt1:A Special Project
More Roseluck? More Roseluck. >”It’s perfect” >You star down at the object in the box >It had better be perfect, you’re paying a lot for it… >The store clerk smiles “I’m glad you find it satisfactory sir. She must be one special girl.” >You smile >”You could say that.” >You walk out of the shop into the February chill >Your thoughts drift to the past few months >Much to your dismay, the winter had been mild. >There was relatively no snow >But, this had worked to you advantage >The mild days allowed you to work on a special project >That including the package you just picked up was for Rose >The special somep0ny in your life

21 hours later 4618714 Dakan The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt1
>>4618705 >Speaking of ponies, there was little news about them anymore >The truth has still yet to be revealed >It was probably for the best >Although one day the rest of the world will know about the destruction of Equestria >The rest of the ponies had settled and have been making a life for themselves on Earth >Even better, they seem to have a positive effect. >A lot that was negative for this world seems to be disappearing >The appearance of the ponies was indeed for the better of Earth >Your thoughts have carried you to your next destination >A local flower shop >As you enter you see a familiar pony working behind the counter >She is facing away for the counter arranging a few flowers >You approach the counter and clear your throat >”Excuse me miss, I need to place an order for a dozen red roses.” >The pony behind the counter doesn’t turn around “Mmm, A dozen red roses, must be for somep0ny special” >You chuckle >”She is wonderful… >”She has the most beautiful green eyes and this pink silky mane” >She giggles a bit “She sounds lovely, do I know her?” >”You may, she also works at a flower shop like this one.” >Rose turns around “You always know the way to my heart, Anon.” >”I have to, you are my special somep0ny”

21 hours later 4618725 Dakan The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt1
>>4618714 >You lean over the counter and give Rose a brief kiss. “You really need to stop this while I’m at work” >”You’re hardly ever home on the weekends anymore…” “I know, but Hearts and Hooves day is always busy; I promise some more time after the holiday.” >You smile >”Good, what do you want for dinner tonight?” >She frowns a bit ”Im going to be home late, please don’t wait up from me…” >”Are you sure? It would be no problem at all.” “I’m sure, have a good day…” >She quickly turns back to her work >You leave the flower shop >It’s great that rose can get some time in at work… >But it meant less time together >Thankfully though, her being away has given you time for the project >Over the recent months Rose has seemed rather sad >When you questioned her about it she always said it was nothing >But you finally got it out of her >She missed her garden >More so she missed the chance to grow flowers >She said she felt like it was a part that she was missing

21 hours later 4618738 Dakan The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt1
>>4618725 >You then remembered something that your landlord, Mr. Williams had once said >Back when you first signed the lease he mentioned an old green house on the roof that no one used >Later that day you question Mr. Williams again about it >He said it was free to use to any of the residence >He reminded you that it had fallen into some disrepair >It was up to anyone who used it to repair it >That weekend, while Rose was at work you investigated the Greenhouse >There was a little shed and as glass house up there alright >The shed needed some patching on the room >And some panes of glass needed to be replaced >It was going to be a project >But if you worked hard you would be able to have it done in time for Valentine’s day >You have a few more repairs to complete, but you were finally almost finished >One week before Valentines >You hoped that Rose would like it and she would be able to use it >Although you had no doubts about it >She said she could grow anything

21 hours later 4618749 Dakan The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt1
>>4618738 >When you got home, you made sure to place the package into a safe place >It was the other part of Roses Valentine’s Day surprise >And it was also the only part you were worried about >You head up to the top of the apartment building to finish up work on the greenhouse >Nearly finished, just needed to replace one last panel of glass >After a little work you step back and take a look at it >It had been a true labor of love >It was now complete >All that was left was Rose’s flowers >You head down stairs and prepare yourself dinner >Ignoring her statement, you fix up a salad for Rose >You leave a note on the counter about her dinner in the fridge you get ready for bed >You lay there quietly difting in and out of sleep waiting for rose to come back >Eventually you hear the door unlock >The quiet hoof steps indicate that she is trying to make sure not to wake you >You hear a quiet sigh come from the kitchen followed by the opening to the fridge >Good she found the note >You listen to her eat in silence and then quietly trot into the bedroom >She slowly gets into to bed next to you trying to not wake you >Even though you are already awake >As she lays down next to you; you slowly put your arms around her drawing her close >She sighs again as she relaxes into your body “You didn’t have to make me the salad” “Or wait up for me” >You chuckle and give her a kiss on the neck >”What kind of man would I be, if I didn’t take care of my special somep0ny?” >She sighs again “I love you, my stallion.” >”I love you too, Rose.”

21 hours later 4618759 Dakan
>>4618749 End of Part 1 Hmm sounds like someone is making some plans for valentines... I wonder what they are...

24 hours later 4620051 W4rp 404
lol, the old thread is already gone :D

24 hours later 4620425 Pancakes
>>4614657 This is my first MLP story. >>4615381 Why not?

29 hours later 4622890 Anonymous
Bump.

34 hours later 4627827 Anonymous
Page 8 bump.

38 hours later 4631459 Anonymous
4-hour bump? 4-hour bump.

38 hours later 4631536 Slashy
The idea interests me, what does this thread involve

38 hours later 4631657 Pancakes Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed (42.jpg 848x943 60kB)
>>4613741 > Rainbow arrives at the scene. > As instructed, she is wearing the helmet. > A small group of humans are loitering around. > One of them notices her and smiles. "Well, look at what we have here!" > The humans stop their idle conversation and start approaching her. "That's a nice, tight body you got there!" "Hey, I saw her first!" "Why don't we take her for a 'test drive' right here and-" > Suddenly, a very large human appears behind the one talking. > He grabs the smaller man and raises him up in the air effortlessly. "W-w-what!?" > Then, he tosses him into a nearby trash bin. > The other humans quickly back off. > After dusting his hands, he turns to Rainbow. "You here for the job?" the big man asks. > She nods quickly. The big man signals the rest of the humans. > From the back, they bring out a black car. "Pontiac Trans Am," says the big man. "Heavily modified, of course." > Rainbow barely stops herself from squeeing. "Think you can handle it?" > The big man throws her a set of keys. > Rainbow catches them and smiles. "Just who the hay do you think I am!?"

38 hours later 4631680 Pancakes Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed
>>4631657 > After a quick drive around the block, Rainbow returns to the humans. "72 seconds," says the big man. "You're pretty good." "Of course I am," says Rainbow. "I'm the fastest racer around these parts!" "Looks like you weren't blowing hot air, after all." > He motions at the other humans. > They start loading several heavy crates into the vehicle. "What are those?" asks Rainbow. "I thought that professionals like yourself don't ask stupid questions." "O-of course not! I was just, uh... testing you. Yeah, that's it!" > The big man chuckles to himself. "I like you, girl! Not many in our line of work have a sense of humor." > He hands her a piece of paper. Written on it is an address. "Take this car to this location. Once our boys on the other side check the goods, you'll have your money." "Uh, right. Anything else I need to know?" > The big man gives her an evil smile. "Watch your back. Lot of dangerous folk out this night."

39 hours later 4633034 Pancakes Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed (43.jpg 1000x800 53kB)
>>4631680 > Ten minutes later, Rainbow is already halfway to the location. "The guy from the arcade was right!" she cries. "Easy money!" > And when she gets paid, she can buy all sorts of cool stuff for the girls! > A new pet for Fluttershy. > A new oven for Pinkie. > A new dress for Rarity. > A new hat for Applejack. > A new book for Twilight. (one for me, too!) > And maybe even something for the apartment manager! > Err, you know? Just to be polite and stuff. > She quickly shakes her head. "Get it together, Rainbow!" she mutters. "It's not like you like him, or anything like that! He's just a really good guy and-" > Her eyes widen in surprise. She slams on the brakes, hard. > A number of vehicles block the road before her. > She can't pass this way. "W-what in the hay!?" > Then, she hears voices from the blockade. "The Trans Am is here! Get to your positions!" "Isn't it too early? I haven't finished my beer, yet." "Shut the hell up and stop that car! There'll be hell to pay if it makes it to the west side!" > Several cars hum to life at the same time. > Each of them is carrying three or four humans. > And none of them look happy to see her. "Oh, this is not cool!" cries Rainbow. "NOT COOL!"

39 hours later 4633100 Pancakes Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed
>>4633034 > To the left, one of the cars is closing in. > The driver smiles widely as he rams the Trans Am from the side. "SMASH!" > Rainbow manages to stay in control of the vehicle. > But only barely. She narrows her eyes. > So they want to play rough, do they? "Hit it again!" cries one of the humans. > The driver backs away for a moment, preparing to ram her. > Suddenly, Rainbow spins the wheel to the left. > The side of the Trans Am hits the car at an angle, "SMASH!" > Causing it to spin violently as it crashes on the side of the road. "Serves you right!" cries Rainbow. "Take that, you dumb humans!" > Unfortunately, her victory is short-lived. > Another car is closing in from the right. Its windows lower. > A human holding a strange metal device smiles widely. "Say hello to my little friend!" he cries. > Suddenly, something like fireworks shoots out at the Trans Am. > It cracks the glass on the rear of the vehicle, > But it doesn't shatter it. "Aw hell, NO! They bullet-proofed the damn thing!" "Then shoot off the tires, you idiot!" cries the driver. > The human takes aim once more. But before he can fire, "Leave me, ALONE!" cries Rainbow. > She rams the vehicle, hard. "SMASH!" > The second car spins out of control and crashes. > She sighs in relief. Then, she glances at the rear view mirror. > A dozen more vehicles are quickly gaining on her. "Oh, sweet Celestia! What have I gotten myself into!?"

39 hours later 4633232 Anonymous
>>4631536 Ponies on earth and the scenarios that happen as a consequence, usually concerning an anon.

39 hours later 4633235 Anonymous (BRILLIANT.png 593x604 293kB)
>>4631536

40 hours later 4633353 Pancakes
>>4633100 Done for now. Pastebin updated. >>4631536 Step 1: Ponies Step 2: In Earth Step 3: ???? Step 4: PROFIT!

42 hours later 4636360 Anonymous (heart-attack.jpg 378x301 13kB)
>mfw i read this thread everytime

44 hours later 4638465 Dakan Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt2
I have been running into a tough time writing recently. Im gonna dump what I have for now and call it quits for the night. Hopfully this will clear up tommorow. >Another day at school >Another day closer to Valentines >You just left your Economics Class and about to go on lunch >You feel a tap on the shoulder >When you turn around you discover Robert is standing behind you “Hey Anon, what’s up?” >You smile, ever since that night at the dance you and Rob have become pretty good friends >”Nothing much Rob, just about to get some lunch, do you want to join?” “Sure, I have sometime before my next class” >You both head off to the campus café >Sitting down at one of the inside table you begin to discuss how things have been going >”So Rob, how are thing between you and lyra?” “Lyra? Things are fine I’m hoping on getting some alone time with here this weekend.” >”Yeah same thing between me and Rose.” >”What kind of plans do you have for Valentines anyways?” >He shrugs a bit “Nothing special, a quiet dinner at home, maybe curl up on the couch for a nice movie.” “Nothing to extravagant.” “What about you and Rose.” >”I have the exact opposite in mind for Rose.” “Oh? Do tell…” >“Well, as you know Rose works at the florist shops, and one of their busiest days is Valentines.” >“So, I have nothing planned for that day, but the next night I have a nice dinner at a great restaurant.” >“Its supposed to be one of the places that a pony started, they cater to both human and ponies, so I think that she will like it.” >“Afterwords I’ll take her home, and show her a special project I have been working on.”

44 hours later 4638485 Dakan Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt2
>>4638465 >”Over the winter I have been fixing up a greenhouse that sits on top of our apartment building.” >”She has been talking about how she wishes she could be gardening lately you see.” >”So I thought that maybe this will help with that.” >He nods “Seems like you have a big night planned” >”Yeah, but that’s not the best part.” >”After I show her the greenhouse, I’m going to give her this.” >You pull a small box out of your pocket >You started keeping the present on you after Rose nearly discovered it while help you clean. >You open the box and show it to Rob >He lets out a low whistle “Wow! That sure is something! I’m sure she’ll love it.” >”I know she’ll love it. I just hope that she’ll accept it.” “Why wouldn’t she accept it? I mean it’s not like…” >It suddenly dawns on him “Anon, what are you thinking?” >”I know it hasn’t been that long, but me and Rose are prefect for each other.” >”She makes me feel like no one has ever made me feel.” >”I can’t let her just slip away.” >Rob leans back in his chair “I remember a time when you nearly broke a pony’s heart just on the basis of her being a pony.” >”That was then, this is now.” >Rob chuckles and shakes his head. “If you feel like you are ready then man, go ahead and best of luck to you.” >”Thanks man.” P.S. Wont be updating Pastebin until the current part is fully complete

47 hours later 4640414 Pancakes Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed
Suddenly, SURPRISE UPDATES! >>4633100 > One epic car chase and several car crashes later, > Rainbow finds herself being followed by one last vehicle. "They just don't give up, do they?" she mutters to herself. > The Trans Am has taken significant damage from earlier, > She bites her lip as she watches the rear view mirror. > Huh? The vehicle is slowing down. > Suddenly, the sunroof of the vehicle opens up. "Oh, what now!?" > A human pops out carrying a large cannon-shaped device on his shoulders. > Wait a minute! A cannon? "AHAHAHAHAHA!" cries the human. "I'm gonna wreck your shit, BAD!" > He starts aiming the device at the Trans Am. > But before he can fire, something flies into his face. *cough* *cough* *cough* "What the hell was that?" asks the driver. "You okay, bro?" "Yeah! It was just some... cream pie!?" > Suddenly, PIES EVERYWHERE! > Rainbow swerves quickly to dodge most of them, > But the same can't be said for the car behind her. > The windshield of the pursuing vehicle is instantly covered in cream. > And moments later, it crashes on the side of the road. "What the hay was that?" cries Rainbow. "Banana cream pie, of course!" > She watches with mouth agape as a large truck approaches the Trans Am from the side. "P-P-Pinkie Pie!?"

47 hours later 4640436 Pancakes Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed (44.jpg 928x597 78kB)
>>4640414 > "Great work, Pinkie! That should stop them for a while!" > I drive the truck closer to the Trans Am and give Rainbow a wave. "W-where did you get that truck!?" she cries out. "I 'found' it!" says Pinkie. "You 'found' it?" repeats Rainbow. > "Don't ask. Anyway, we need to get out of here before the next wave arrives." "The next wave? You mean that there are more of them after me?" > "Almost all of the east side gangs are out tonight. I have no idea what cargo you're carrying, but they want it BADLY." "Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh!" > "Calm down, Rainbow! I have an idea!" "An idea? How are we supposed to-" > I open the driver's side door and stretch out my hand. > "Jump over to me!" "What!? Are you crazy!?" > "There isn't any time to slow down!" > From behind them, they can hear the sound of more vehicles coming. "This is insane! Maybe we can still lose them..." > "Forget the Trans Am! Open the door, quickly!" > Rainbow reluctantly complies. She takes a step closer. > Then, she sees the pavement and realizes just how fast they are going. "Oh my gosh!" she cries. "I, I, I can't do this!" > She retreats back into the driver's seat. > This is bad. There isn't much time left. > "Pinkie! Grab the wheel!" "Okey, dokey, lokey!"

47 hours later 4640452 Pancakes Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed
>>4640436 > I slowly climb out onto the side of the truck. "What the hay are you doing!?" cries Rainbow. "Have you gone completely insane!?" > "You're going to have to jump, Rainbow!" "And what if we don't make it!?" she cries. "We'll both be killed!" > I climb even further out onto the front of the truck. > For some reason, a familiar song starts playing on the radio. "So now we're flying, we're free," "We're free before the thunderstorm!" "On towards the wilderness," "Our quest carries on!" > "Pinkie Pie! What the heck are you doing!?" "Just thought that you'd need an awesome theme for this scene!" > Damn it, Pinkie Pie. > We don't need no... > Damn BGM for this scene! > I turn back to Rainbow Dash and extend my hand as far as I can. > "You're going to have to trust me!" > The cyan pegasus takes one last glance at me. Then, she sighs to herself. "Oh, buck-" > In one swift motion, Rainbow leaps out of the Trans Am.

47 hours later 4640459 Pancakes Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed
>>4640452 > I manage to catch Rainbow by the waist. > "Gotcha!" "Oomph!" > I quickly carry her back inside the truck. > And as we make the turn, the Trans Am crashes straight into a ditch. > Then suddenly... "KABOOM!" > A grand explosion fills the night sky of the city. "Ooo, pretty!" says Pinkie Pie. "Let's do that again!" > The cyan pony curls up beside me, shaking. > I gently stroke her mane as we head back home. > Twenty minutes later. "I'll be back soon," Pinkie says. "I just need to put this back where I found it." > The pink pony drops us off at Ponyville Apartments before heading off with the truck. > Where did she find that truck, anyway? > Then, I feel a light tug on the side of my shirt. > Rainbow Dash looks up at me, teary-eyed. "S-sorry about that," she says. "I just wanted to earn some extra money, and I thought that if-" > I raise a hand to interrupt her. > "Forget about it," I say. "I'm too tired to scold you tonight, anyway." "B-but!" > "I said, forget about it!" "Okay..." > "And wipe away those tears! They don't fit such a pretty pony like you." > Rainbow squeaks in surprise. > Wait, what? Did I just say that? > Ah, forget it. I probably lack sleep. > Without turning back, I head back to my room and collapse on my bed.

47 hours later 4640475 Pancakes Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed (45.gif 300x300 1025kB)
>>4640459 > The next morning, Rainbow Dash insists on making me breakfast. > Probably hoping that I'd forget about last night's fiasco. > "You do realize that I'm still telling Twilight about last night, right?" "Oh, sure," says Rainbow. "I've already prepared myself for her lecture." > "Alright, then." > She watches me closely as I eat. "How is the taste?" she asks. > "Not bad. Have you been practicing?" "N-not really," she says. "Anyp0ny can cook up something like this!" > She gives me this awkward smile. > Why does she seem so happy, anyway? "Oh! And before I forget - can I ask you something?" > "Go ahead." "Where can I apply for a driver's license?" > I almost choke in surprise. > This pony just doesn't learn, does she? "Dear Princess Celestia," "I used to think that loyalty was all about standing up for your friends," "But now I can see that it's more than that." "Today, I learned that it's just as important to have faith in them." "Because good friends will never leave you hanging!" "P.S. I think I'll apply for a learner's permit this week." "- Your Loyal Subject, Rainbow Dash"

47 hours later 4640598 Pancakes (I brought you a pastebin.jpg 226x223 6kB)
>>4640475 And that ends the 4th chapter. Your feedback on this one is appreciated. Updated on pastebin - http://pastebin.com/u/ChocolateChipPancake. The next chapter is going to be something a little bit... different from usual. It isn't all 'rainbows and unicorns' here on Earth, after all.

52 hours later 4642686 Anonymous
5-hour bump.

53 hours later 4642867 Spart
>>4640598 well done Pancakes, wonder what the ponies would do again the gang's and stuff...

53 hours later 4643283 Anonymous (1346179527661.gif 1036x654 186kB)
>>4640598

55 hours later 4645051 Spart
>>4642686 bump

55 hours later 4645109 Parasite Steve
Alright, I think I'll start mine tonight. It'll be a Trixie story. >inb4gotobedseth

60 hours later 4650390 Anonymous
>>4645109 seth pls

62 hours later 4653234 Anonymous
Bump

64 hours later 4655589 LeStrange
>>4642867 agreed

68 hours later 4659241 Anonymous
Indeterminate number of hours bump.

68 hours later 4659519 Spart
>>4659241 bump to be sure

69 hours later 4659921 Anonymous
>>4659841 I wondered when someone would take on the realistic route. I look forward to it, show me what you got

69 hours later 4660078 Anonymous (zoidberg.jpg 400x300 97kB)
>>4660000 ......I think you missed your own point

70 hours later 4660260 Anonymous
>>4660167 doesn't mean it couldn't be entertaining Have some pride in what you do

70 hours later 4660337 Anonymous
>>4659996 >>4660000 This somehow reminds me of that image that we post when /b/ comes here to complain about pony shitposters. And I don't even into AIE. .

70 hours later 4660356 Anonymous
>>4660289 But it took you at least 22 minutes, to post? Go away and troll whatever tripfag that rustled your jimmies. The AiE folk hardly even pass by this thread. Thanks for the bump.

74 hours later 4661926 Anonymous
And bump.

77 hours later 4663526 Spart
>>4661926 bump²

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79 hours later 4665021 Spart
>>4665002 dat file name captcha : rose couphly what ?

79 hours later 4665050 Anonymous
>>4665021 Dude. What. I was hoping no one would see I posted the shadowless version but you managed to reply in 45 seconds. Delete your post and requote it. Then I'll delete mine. No one will ever know

79 hours later 4665179 Spart
>>4665050 sorry, but i just thought: fuck dat file name ! so i had to make a comment, why should i delet it ?

80 hours later 4665476 Anonymous
>>4640598 Alright, but far from your best work.

83 hours later 4668874 Spart
>>4663526 bump up the jam

85 hours later 4670792 Spart
>>4668874 hm another bump hope i dont overdo it ...

86 hours later 4672292 Anonymous
>>4665018 I lold

87 hours later 4673234 LeStrange
>>4672292 While i wait. http://youtu.be/3xQmJ_vxHB4

91 hours later 4677221 Anonymous
4 hour bump.

93 hours later 4678582 Anonymous
Bumpdate: Still having some writers block issues. Mayb just end the current part i am on and skip to the next part. Chapter may be shorter than planned...

93 hours later 4678585 Dakan
>>4678582 Forgot the name... Been a long day...

93 hours later 4678823 Spart
>>4678585 no problem Dakan

97 hours later 4680146 Dakan
Bedtime bump

100 hours later 4681787 Spart
>>4680146 bump

100 hours later 4681823 Anonymous
I envy you bastards. I really do. Writing is so fucking difficult.

103 hours later 4684016 Spart
>>4681787 keep bumpin bumpin yeah

107 hours later 4687413 IaTM
bumpin'

109 hours later 4689944 Spart
good night bump from me

114 hours later 4694451 Dakan
Bring Up My Post

117 hours later 4697550 Anonymous
And bump. Slow week.

117 hours later 4697562 Anonymous
bump before bed

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120 hours later 4698879 Dakan The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt 3: The Big Night
Well, I decided to screw part 2 and continue on the part 3. So here is Roseluck! >Before you know realize, it is Valentine’s Day. >Rose is working late again >Even though you and rose have a nice evening planned for tomorrow >You still feel like doing something nice >Earlier you get a dozen roses and make a small nice dinner >You are sitting on the couch when she walks through the door >You get up as she enters and start to help her with her coat >She looks at the table and sighs “You waited up, made dinner, and got me flowers…” “How did I get this lucky?” >”If you tell me how I got so lucky, I’ll tell you.” >She giggles and gives you a hug and a kiss >You both walk over and have a quiet meal together. >After the dinner you clean up while Rose gets ready for bed >When you walk into the bed room you she is already in bed waiting for you >You crawl into bed and pull her close “Thank you for the dinner, it was nice.” >”Just wait for tomorrow night. It will be better.” >She sighs and snuggles into your body >The heat of her body presses against you >You breathe in deeply and inhale the smell of roses >You slowly drift off to sleep with her in your arms >You are slow to wake the next morning >You are roused by the smell of coffee >You quickly realized that Rose isn’t lying next to you anymore

120 hours later 4698887 Dakan The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt 3
>>4698879 >As you gradually wake up you hear the sound of someone singing >Not someone, somep0ny >You get up out of bed and make your way into the kitchen >You see Rose by the stove looking like she is trying to make some eggs >However you stove isn’t exactly made for a pony >She turns around and sees you staring at her >She smiles at you “I was trying to make some breakfast for us” >She giggles “I’m having a bit of a tough time though” >You chuckle >”Here, let me help, before you burn down the whole complex” >Between you and Rose you finish up breakfast and sit down and start eating >She looks across the table at you “So what exactly are the plans for tonight anyways?” >”I guess I can let you in on some of it.” >”We are going out to dinner tonight, after words, I was thinking a quiet evening watching a movie together.” >She smiles at you “Oh is that all?” >”Would it be any fun if I told you everything?” >She shakes her head and continues to eat her breakfast >The rest of the day passes by normally >As the time grows closer to the dinner you and Rose start to get dressed >You were a nice shirt and tie combo >Rose wears a simple dress

120 hours later 4698894 Dakan The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt 3
>>4698887 >”You look beautiful” >She smiles shyly at you ”Thank you and you look as handsome as ever.” >You open the door out of the apartment and escort her down to the streets >You hail a cab and head off to the restaurant >After a short ride you arrive at the restaurant >She smiles at you as you get out of the cab “I’ve wanted to eat here since this place opened.” >”I know, I hope the food is as good as they say it is.” >Inside you see most of the customers are ponies >In fact most of workers are ponies also >The restaurant seems to be built to accommodate ponies >As you and rose are seated you take a look over the menu >It’s a mostly vegan menu fit for both humans and ponies >There are a few specialty meal made for ponies >You don’t think that a daisy salad sound particularly tasty. >You order a regular salad and Rose orders a lily salad >The atmosphere here is nice; a good combination of human and pony taste >You and Rose share a nice quiet dinner together >After the dinner you and rose start making your way back to the apartment >Rose starts questioning you about the rest of the night “Come on, you need to tell me what next.” >You smile slyly >”You are just going to have to wait until we get back to the apartment” “Can you at least tell me what movie you have planned.”

120 hours later 4698902 Dakan The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt 3
>>4698894 >You nod >”We are going to watch your favorite” >Her smiles grows broad and she wrap her arms around you again >”But that is after the surprise” >You arrive back at the apartment >You and Rose start you climb up to the apartment >As you get to your landing you continue your way up >Rose gives you a strange look but follows you anyways >Down inside the pocket of your pants you feel the box gaining wait >You nerves begin to build and your hands shake a little >Don’t worry, it’ll all be fine… >At least you hope so… >You continue to climb until you reach the doorway to the roof >You wait for Rose to join you before you continue onto the roof >Rose take a quick look around and then looks at you in puzzlement “It’s a great view Anon, but what is the surprise” >You walk over and stand next to greenhouse >”I know its not a proper garden, but at least here you can grow some flowers.” >”I checked with the landlord. No one else has ever used this. I have been building it through the winter.” >You smile at Rose >Rose looks surprised beyond words >She looks between you and the greenhouse “You rebuilt this, for me? So I can grow flowers?” >She looks like she is almost on the verge of tears >She trots over to you and throws herself into your arms

120 hours later 4698908 Dakan The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt 3
>>4698902 “Anon, how can I ever thank you? This is the best thing anyp0ny could have ever gotten me.” >You pull her into a tight hug >”I’m glad you like it Rose, I can’t wait to see the flowers you will grow” >After a long hug she lets go and admires the greenhouse some more >Well, here we go, time for the leap… >”Rose…?” >She turns around and looks at you. A smile still locked on her face. >”There is one more thing I have for you.” >She smiles “What more can a pony ask for from her special somep0ny?” >You swallow hard before continuing >”Rose, ever since you came into my life, you have changed me.” >”Work became more bearable and so did school.” >”You showed me that love can transcend between species” >”You have shown me what it is like to be truly loved.” >”And I don’t think I can live without that in my life.” >Somewhere in the middle of the speech your brain had shut off >You find yourself on one knee with the box in your outstretched hand >You reach up and begin to open the box. >”Roseluck, will you marry me?”

120 hours later 4698917 Dakan
>>4698908 Well, end of Part 3. I'm not liking how Chapter 4 is comming out. It doesn't feel right... Any feedback would be nice.

120 hours later 4698927 Spart
>>4698917 great work Dakan, i love it!

121 hours later 4699145 Anonymous
>>4698917 I'm sad to see the story progressing so quickly, but it's looking good so far. Hope we can get maybe 2 or 3 more chapters. Still great work as always and looking forward to the next part.

122 hours later 4699631 Anonymous
On Friday I will have a story for you guys. Its going to be about how wondrous a human civilisation is to a pony ( Lrya)

122 hours later 4699734 Anonymous
>>4699631 Sounds good. I mean Equestria is great and all but it's too...stable. I'd imagine if you are not a Element of Harmony life would be pretty boring. Earth on the other hand you never really know whats going to go down. Shit would intrigue a pony to the point where'd they won't want to leave.

125 hours later 4700908 Anonymous
Bump before sleep.

125 hours later 4701157 Anonymous (1338436091585.gif 296x291 932kB)
>>4631657 >>4631680 >>4633034 >>4633100 >>4633100 >>4640436 >>4640414 >>4640452 >>4640459 >>4640475 >>4640598 I can´t wait for the next update.

129 hours later 4704795 Mortimer Mouse (3543658679.png 800x600 280kB)
If anyone cares, I'll be putting my Pillow Case story on hold. I have plans for it, but I'm just not motivated enough. On the other hand, I feel like writing a Tracy story, which I'll probably put FAR more effort into. Sound good?

130 hours later 4705913 Anonymous
>>4704795 Do it

130 hours later 4705957 Anonymous (clopfuel.jpg 545x945 130kB)
>>4704795 Go for it

134 hours later 4710949 Anonymous
4 hour bump.

138 hours later 4715761 Anonymous
Bump.

141 hours later 4717383 Spart
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145 hours later 4719079 LeStrange
>>4717383 .

145 hours later 4719125 Anonymous
If ponies come to earth they will be lost in a big city and be captured by pony ham and used as sex slaves for those spaghetti spilling bastards.

145 hours later 4719289 Anonymous
>>4719125 They'd be lost in a fuck huge city yeah, not sure about the sex slaves part. But thats what makes it interesting. Its the ultimate stranger in a strange land. The most peaceful being ever ends up in a land full of unpredictable hyper intelligent monkeys.

146 hours later 4719448 Dakan
>>4719125 The last part would only happen if they appeared in an universe that mlp was a tv show. With my story mlp never existed. I'm actually thinking about doing a more realistic take on all of this once as roseluck is complete.

151 hours later 4723603 Dakan
Good Morning Bump

156 hours later 4727671 Anonymous
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